Sunday, October 30, 2022

Characters!

 So! I've developed a lot of the general story behind Roselight so far, and I promise more of the vague summary is coming soon!

But I wanted to take a moment to develop some of the character relationships that will become important in the rest of the story - and showcase these characters to begin with!

So here is the diagram I made for myself, which several sources report is illegible but pretty:


In fact, it's even less legible after the blogger compression, so don't even bother reading the tiny text - I'll just transcribe it below.

The four main characters we have so far are Maliyah, Clare, Noira, and Marion. Each arrow depicts one direction of a relationship between two characters, with a little associated text blurb to describe some of the main attributes of their dynamic. The text mostly describes how the starting point of the arrow feels/acts towards the endpoint of the arrow.

(Note that Marion only knows Noira, while the other three develop close friendship with each other.)

MARION -> NOIRA

Mentor

  • Mostly professional, work-related
  • Limited emotional support
  • Wants the best for Noira; recognizes her potential and skill, but has a bit of a "vision" for her career
  • Some inaccurate social views bleed over into a misguided protectiveness


NOIRA -> MARION

Student

  • Looks up to Marion for guidance, primarily career-oriented
  • Very impressionable, and tends to value his opinions on other matters more than is perhaps justified
  • Perceives - mostly correctly - very high expectations, both as a professional and just in general as a person.
  • Frets quite a bit about disappointing or letting him down, failing to meet his "vision"
  • Will begin to pull pretty strongly from said vision as she learns more about who she is, culminating in The Big Revelation of Doom^TM


NOIRA -> CLARE

Confides

  • Gets along very naturally despite very different overall demeanors
  • Noira finds them very approachable & trusts them with more insecure feelings than Maliyah
  • Admires their sociability/extrovertedness, tries to learn some self-confidence
  • Somewhat envies their pretty clear sense of what they're doing in life - namely, having fun! Clare has ambitions, but doesn't depend on meeting external goals to enjoy the journey

CLARE -> NOIRA

Advises

  • Clare is very good at helping people talk through their feelings, which Noira struggles with.
  • Admires her apparent focus & interest in a particular niche, as they have difficulty finding specific interests
  • Serves as a sort of grounding/reference point - am I being unreasonable? Clare will be honest with you.


CLARE -> MALIYAH

Assures

  • Similar to relationship with Noira, but Clare knows Maliyah's tendencies much better by now & tends to know how she's feeling already
  • Lots of friendly banter that stems from this mutual understanding
  • Gently guides when she & Noira have trouble understanding each other

MALIYAH -> CLARE

Supports

  • Maliyah's known Clare a long time, and they've both helped each other through rough times
  • Provides a lot of just consistent support & company. Clare isn't specifically unhappy with their current job, but Maliyah visiting & hanging out often goes a long way
  • Much like Noira, Maliyah often confides her insecurities to Clare, particularly when that barrier with Noira appears


MALIYAH -> NOIRA

Shares

  • Wants to help make Noira feel at home, understood & supported
  • Quietly knows Noira needs to see more of the reality of Orus, but is more than happy to explore with her...
  • Sometimes has trouble relating to Noira's understanding of the world; occasionally inclined to dismiss views she perceives as naïve
  • Still, ultimately comes to care strongly for her...

NOIRA -> MALIYAH

Learns

  • Again, Noira is deeply impressionable, swept up in the excitement of discovery - exploring Orus and making new friends
  • Really enjoys learning from & listening to Maliyah, even if much of her perspective is foreign
  • Desperately wants to impress well on Maliyah, and to reciprocate the support that means so much to her...

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