So! I've developed a lot of the general story behind Roselight so far, and I promise more of the vague summary is coming soon!
But I wanted to take a moment to develop some of the character relationships that will become important in the rest of the story - and showcase these characters to begin with!
So here is the diagram I made for myself, which several sources report is illegible but pretty:
In fact, it's even less legible after the blogger compression, so don't even bother reading the tiny text - I'll just transcribe it below.
The four main characters we have so far are Maliyah, Clare, Noira, and Marion. Each arrow depicts one direction of a relationship between two characters, with a little associated text blurb to describe some of the main attributes of their dynamic. The text mostly describes how the starting point of the arrow feels/acts towards the endpoint of the arrow.
(Note that Marion only knows Noira, while the other three develop close friendship with each other.)
MARION -> NOIRA
Mentor
- Mostly professional, work-related
- Limited emotional support
- Wants the best for Noira; recognizes her potential and skill, but has a bit of a "vision" for her career
- Some inaccurate social views bleed over into a misguided protectiveness
Student
- Looks up to Marion for guidance, primarily career-oriented
- Very impressionable, and tends to value his opinions on other matters more than is perhaps justified
- Perceives - mostly correctly - very high expectations, both as a professional and just in general as a person.
- Frets quite a bit about disappointing or letting him down, failing to meet his "vision"
- Will begin to pull pretty strongly from said vision as she learns more about who she is, culminating in The Big Revelation of Doom^TM
NOIRA -> CLARE
Confides
- Gets along very naturally despite very different overall demeanors
- Noira finds them very approachable & trusts them with more insecure feelings than Maliyah
- Admires their sociability/extrovertedness, tries to learn some self-confidence
- Somewhat envies their pretty clear sense of what they're doing in life - namely, having fun! Clare has ambitions, but doesn't depend on meeting external goals to enjoy the journey
CLARE -> NOIRA
Advises
- Clare is very good at helping people talk through their feelings, which Noira struggles with.
- Admires her apparent focus & interest in a particular niche, as they have difficulty finding specific interests
- Serves as a sort of grounding/reference point - am I being unreasonable? Clare will be honest with you.
CLARE -> MALIYAH
Assures
- Similar to relationship with Noira, but Clare knows Maliyah's tendencies much better by now & tends to know how she's feeling already
- Lots of friendly banter that stems from this mutual understanding
- Gently guides when she & Noira have trouble understanding each other
MALIYAH -> CLARE
Supports
- Maliyah's known Clare a long time, and they've both helped each other through rough times
- Provides a lot of just consistent support & company. Clare isn't specifically unhappy with their current job, but Maliyah visiting & hanging out often goes a long way
- Much like Noira, Maliyah often confides her insecurities to Clare, particularly when that barrier with Noira appears
MALIYAH -> NOIRA
Shares
- Wants to help make Noira feel at home, understood & supported
- Quietly knows Noira needs to see more of the reality of Orus, but is more than happy to explore with her...
- Sometimes has trouble relating to Noira's understanding of the world; occasionally inclined to dismiss views she perceives as naïve
- Still, ultimately comes to care strongly for her...
NOIRA -> MALIYAH
Learns
- Again, Noira is deeply impressionable, swept up in the excitement of discovery - exploring Orus and making new friends
- Really enjoys learning from & listening to Maliyah, even if much of her perspective is foreign
- Desperately wants to impress well on Maliyah, and to reciprocate the support that means so much to her...
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